Analysis of Research Articles
By Barochiner, Erika and Dib, Daniela
Research Articles: Analysis of the Results, Discussion,
and Conclusions Sections
Research articles are divided into different sections,
each devoted to a specific purpose. Swales and Feak (1994) analyzed each of
them and provided useful insights on how they should be structured. Broadly
speaking, the introduction presents the research
area to be studied, identifies a gap in the field and states the purpose
of the paper. The methods section describes the procedures followed to conduct
the study. In the results section, the authors present the outcomes of the data
collection process. Then, in the discussion section, they interpret the results
in the light of the literature review discussed in the introduction to the
paper. It should be noted that the discussion section may be a part of the
results section or not (Swales & Feak, 1994). The next section in the
article is the conclusion, where the authors summarize the main points under
discussion and make recommendations for future research. Although there exist
several papers discussing the characteristics of these sections, there are no
papers comparing and contrasting the results, discussion and conclusions
sections of two specific articles, one in the field of medicine (Devereaux et al., 2014) and one in the field of
education (Lys, 2013). Therefore, the purpose of this work is to analyze these
three sections in the above mentioned articles and identify any similarities
and differences between them.
With respect to the results sections, the word results is centered on the page in the
medicine paper (Devereaux et al., 2014), whereas, in the education paper (Lys, 2013), this word is on the left margin. In both
articles, the information has been clearly organized into subsections which
present the results obtained with relation to specific areas addressed in the
study. Such information is further expanded and clarified through the use of
tables and figures in both papers. However, while the formatting of tables
appears to be consistent with APA (2010) style in the education paper, which is
reflected by the appropriate use of capitalization, italics and spacing, among
other features, the tables in the medicine paper seem to have been formatted
according to a different style. In addition, although both papers make clear
in-text references to tables and figures, Lys
(2013) uses the expression in Table in “As I have reported in Table 2,
the average [...]” (p. 102) without brackets and the see Figure in “The
length of the recordings increased each week (see Figure 1)” (p. 101) between
brackets, whereas Devereaux et al. (2014) place the reference to both tables
and figures between brackets, using the abbreviation Fig. in “The effect
of aspirin was consistent across subgroups (P≥0.16 for all interactions) (Fig.
2)” (p. 1498), in the latter case. Finally, drawing an analogy between the two
sections, it may be observed that both use the past tense and are isolated from
the discussion section.
As far as the discussion section
is concerned, both articles provide an interpretation of the results presented
in the previous section in the light of previously conducted studies by
establishing points in common as well as differences, which is consistent with
the suggestions provided by Swales and Feak (1994). However, sources are
acknowledged following different in-text citation styles. While Lys (2013) has used APA
(2010) style, the medicine paper (Devereaux
et al., 2014) uses superscript numbers to
refer the reader directly to the reference list. In addition, the word Discussion
is centered on the page in the medicine paper, and the section does not
include sub-headings. On the other hand, in the education paper, this word is
on the left margin, and the section includes a sub-heading. It is worth
mentioning that the authors in both articles have used personalized utterances.
There is a tendency to use modal verbs such as will and should to
signal possibility and advice, respectively. The medicine article includes both
modal verbs, whereas the education article only uses should.
With regard to conclusions, only
the education article (Lys,
2013) has a clearly identified conclusions
section. In the medicine article (Devereaux
et al., 2014), conclusions have been
integrated to the discussion section instead and they have been compacted in a
very short paragraph at the end of the section. Since no hedging has been used,
the conclusion statements seem too strong. In the education paper, on the other
hand, the conclusion is much longer. In this case, certainty has been weakened
through the use of expressions, such as suggest in “The data suggest
that [...]” (Lys, 2013, p. 107) and apparently in “Students
apparently blamed the repetitive and predictable nature of many exchanges with
their host family” (Lys, 2013, p. 107), as well as through the use of modal
verbs. It should be noted that Lys makes reference to work conducted by other
authors even in this section, which would indicate that she is still discussing
results and making comparisons. However, conclusions should reflect the
author’s ability to summarize the findings of the study by highlighting any
relevant aspects and advising on further lines of research.
After a thorough analysis of the
above-mentioned sections, we conclude that although the articles under analysis
belong to different fields, their results, discussion and conclusions sections comply
with the requirements of academic papers in terms of structure and content,
with the exception of the conclusions section in the education paper which
provide further discussion instead of summarizing relevant study findings.
Finally, the main differences between the papers lie in the length of the
different sections, the citation and table formatting styles and the fact that
the conclusions have been included in the discussion section in the medical
paper, while in the education paper they appear in a separate section.
References
American Psychological Association. (2010). Publication
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Lys, F. (2013). The development of advanced learner oral
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Swales,
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