martes, 19 de noviembre de 2013

Analysis on the Use of In-text Citations
The American Psychological Association (APA) style offers authors guidance on many features of academic writing. Some features included in the APA style manual are in-text citations, which are analyzed in detail in the article “Developing Voice by Composing Haiku: A Social-Expressivist Approach for Teaching Haiku Writing in EFL Contexts” (Iida, 2010, p. 28).
With respect to in-text citations, the article seems to have partially observed the APA rules. With regard to paraphrased in-text citations, the article has complied with the APA. “According to Matsuda (2001)” is an example, in which the author’s name is included in a signal phrase and only the year is placed in parentheses. However, with regard to direct quotes, the article seems to have deviated from the APA rules. “According to Gradin (1995, 110)” and “According to Ivanič (1998, 97)” show that the abbreviation of “page” p. is not included (Iida, 2010, pp. 29, 33).
The analysis seems to indicate that the article written by Iida (2010) “Developing Voice by Composing Haiku: A Social-Expressivist Approach for Teaching Haiku Writing in EFL Contexts” (p. 28) has partially observed the APA rules regarding in-text citations.








References
American Psychological Association. (2010).  Publication Manual of the American
          Psychological Association (6th ed). Washington, DC: Author.
Iida, A. (2010). Developing voice by composing haiku: A social-expressive approach for teaching haiku writing in EFL contexts. English Teaching Forum (1): pp. 28-34.


Developing Voice by Composing Haiku
            According to Iida (2010), in English as a Foreing Language (EFL) settings, the focus seems to be on grammar rules, error reduction and memorization of forms, which leaves students at a disadvantage when they have to use English in real situations.  Iida (2010) asserts that “the social-expressivist approach can facilitate EFL university students’ development of voice and audience in the L2 writing context” (p.29). According to Iida (2010), learners are able to “express their voice in a social context that presumes an audience” (p.28).
            Iida (2010) affirms that “poetry, in particular, offers special challenges, but one type of poem that is manageable for the EFL classroom is haiku, a short, three-line Japanese poem with a specific number of syllables in each line” (p.28).Therefore, haiku helps learners write fluently because its form requires the selection of the appropriate words to communicate their inner feelings or ideas to other people.
            During the composition of the poem, learners are expected to describe situations and express their attitudes, ideas, and experiences. Matsuda (2001) affirms that “individuals acquire voice by using language over time in a variety of social encounters” (as cited in Iida, 2010, p.29). According to Bishop (2003), “writing is an ongoing process of negotiation to make meaning” (as cited in Iida, 2010, p. 29).
With regard to its structure, Iida (2010) describes haiku as “a Japanese poem that contains 17 syllables in a three-line 5-7-5 syllable pattern” (p. 28). It has a seasonal reference and a cutting word, which can be an actual word or a punctuation mark. Reader-centeredness is a fundamental concept in haiku, therefore there exist multiple interpretations.  Haiku is not simply a means for self-expression, but a communicative act that favors writer-reader interaction.  
            Various approaches to teaching the writing of haiku can be applied in class. The process consists of the following five steps. The first step consists in reviewing the concept of haiku. Then, after collecting material and impressions, the composition of haiku follows. The fourth step consists in peer reading, which lets learners see how an audience interprets and reacts to their voice and intent. The publication of haiku is the last step, which increases the awareness of audience.
            In conclusion, composing haiku enables learners to develop an identifiable voice with a high sense of writer-reader interaction. It structures learning around communicative contexts where students articulate their personal needs or interests in a social environment.



References
Iida, A. (2010). Developing voice by composing haiku: A social-expressive approach for teaching haiku writing in EFL contexts. English Teaching Forum (1): pp. 28-34.



jueves, 14 de noviembre de 2013


Wikipedia: Writing for the World
The article, written by Tardy (2010), depicts an “approach to introducing the skills of academic writing for L2 writers through the process of composing an article for the web-based encyclopedia site Wikipedia (www.wikipedia.org)” (p.13). As Tardy (2010) states, “the term wiki refers to a collaborative web-based space that can be modified by any user” (p. 13), and Wikipedia is one of the most recognized wikis in the world.
Producing a piece of writing for Wikipedia is a great opportunity for Language 2 (L2) students to acquire academic literacy skills. Different skills have to be developed and several steps have to be followed in order to compose and publish Wikipedia articles.
Before writing, there must exist a suitable understanding of the website itself; general guidelines and kinds of topics should be closely examined. The second and third steps consist in gathering information and creating an outline. The fourth step is the creation of a first draft. Peer review is the fifth step, in which each student receives feedback on content, clarity, and style. Once revision has taken place, citation has to be considered in order to “avoid plagiarism”, as Keck (2006) claims (as cited in Tardy, 1993, p. 12). The next step is the final proofreading, in which close attention to spelling, vocabulary, grammar, and punctuation must be paid. In this stage, several phrases or words may be hyperlinked. Finally, the piece of writing is published for a global audience, and any reader may then add, change, or delete content.
            Tardy (2010) emphasizes that “in producing a text for Wikipedia, students gain a real sense of audience and enjoy the satisfaction of seeing their work published on a high-traffic global website” (p. 18). Academic writing seems to be challenging for L2 students who are eager to develop their academic skills.
References

Tardy, C. (2010). Writing for the world: Wikipedia as an introduction to Academic Writing. English Teaching Forum, 1, pp. 12-19, 27.

miércoles, 13 de noviembre de 2013

Analysis on the Use of American Psychological Association (APA) Rules
            APA (2010) style offers academic authors guidance on many aspects of academic writing. Some aspects covered in the APA style manual are in-text citations, signal phrases, and reference lists, which are analyzed in detail in the article “Providing increased access to English L2 students of computer science at a South African University” (Dalvit, Murray, & Terzoli, 2005, p. 72).
            With respect to paraphrased in-text citations, APA rules seem to have been observed in the abovementioned article. Some examples are “According to Heugh (2002)”, in which the author’s name is included in a signal phrase and only the year is placed in parentheses, and “(Boughey, 2002)”, in which there is an allusion to a study, and both the author’s name and the year are listed in parentheses. “(Council on Higher Education, 2001)” is another example of paraphrased in-text citations. In this example, the author of the source is an organization or agency and both the organization and year are listed in parentheses (Dalvit et al, 2005, pp. 72, 73).
            With regard to signal phrases, APA rules seem to have been also observed. Signal phrases introduce paraphrases, summaries and direct quotations, and reflect the author’s tone, attitude and position. Writers can use them in several ways when they introduce quoted or cited material into their texts: through the use of specific verbs or through the use of according to. “According to Halliday and Martin (1993)” and “According to Heugh (2002)” are examples of signal phrases. Signal verbs like pointed out, claimed, acknowledged, asserted, among others, have not been used in this article (Dalvit et al, 2005, pp. 72, 73).
            With respect to Reference lists, it appears that the article has not adhered to the APA style. According to the APA (2010) style, reference lists should appear on a new page separate from the body of the paper, under the heading References. The heading should be centered at the top of the page and should not be bolded, underlined, or between quotation marks. In this article, the heading References is bolded, is not centered and is followed by a colon.
            The analysis indicates that the article “Providing increased access to English L2 students of computer science at a South African University” has complied with APA rules regarding in-text citations and signal verbs. With respect to the reference list, this article, evidently, has followed a different direction.
References
American Psychological Association. (2010).  Publication Manual of the American
          Psychological Association (6th ed). Washington, DC: Author
Boughey, C. (2002). Naming Students’ “Problems”: An Analysis of Language-Related Discourses at a South African University. Teaching in Higher Education, 7, 295-307.
Dalvit, L., Murray, S., & Terzoli, A. (2005). Providing increased access to English L2 students of computer science at a South African University. US-China Education Review, Sep. 2005, Vol. 2 (9).
Halliday, M.A.K., & Martin, J.R. (1993). Writing Science: Literacy and Discursive
        Power. Pittsburgh: University of Pittsburgh Press Wenzlaff, T. L., & Wieseman, K. C.   
       (2004).
Heugh, K. (2002). The Case Against Bilingual and Multilingual Education in South Africa:
       Laying Bare the Myths. Perspectives in Education, 20, 1-196.




jueves, 7 de noviembre de 2013

Discourse Community
            Not all communities are discourse communities. According to Swales (1990), there is a list of six specific criteria for determining if a community is in fact a discourse community.
            In the first place, a discourse community has a broadly agreed set of common goals. Every discourse community has ideas or goals set forth to be accomplished. The cohort program exemplifies this characteristic. As Putnam & Borko (2000) stated:
The program aimed to: provide teachers with the confidence to connect what they do in their classrooms to research-informed practices; immerse teachers in a collaborative culture that allowed them to learn from one another as colleagues; consider teacher input in course content and structure design. (As cited in Wenzlaff & Wieseman, 2004, para. 2).
Thus, they [teachers] were "a team working toward the same goal," one teacher stated (as cited in Wenzlaff & Wieseman, 2004, The Cohort Becomes a Collaborative Culture section, para. 3). According to Kutz (1997):
The community college can be seen as a subset of this larger discourse community and also as a discourse community in its own right. Its members have, over time, developed a common discourse that involves shared knowledge, common purposes, common relationships, and similar attitudes and values. (As cited in Kelly-Kleese, 2004, The Community College as a Discourse Community section, para. 2).
            In the second place, there must be participatory mechanisms to provide information and feedback. Teacher reflection and learning emerge in social practice. Through the use of a cohort-based program, according to Mycue (2001), “group work may be a key to meaningful, effective, sustained professional development and a necessary component of adult learning” (as cited in Wenzlaff & Wieseman, 2004, Teacher Learning in a Collaborative Culture section, para. 4). “One of the important aspects that the professors learned when teaching in the cohort was to be constantly in step with the teachers. […] Not only did teachers grow and learn as professionals, the professors as teachers also grew professionally” (Wenzlaff & Wieseman, 2004, Context of the Study, para. 8). According to Hoffman-Kipp, Artiles & Lopez Torres (2003), the nature of human activity in cultural contexts supports learning environments where people collaborate, provide solutions to problems, and rely on more experienced members of the activity system.  “… [T]eachers are participating in the construction of knowledge as well as crafting identities.” (Hoffman-Kipp, Artiles & Lopez Torres, 2003, Teacher reflection and learning emerge in social practice section, para. 2).
            In the third place, the community members have to be intercommunicated, so there must be information exchange. Teachers interact with their colleagues in activities that require communication and exchange of ideas where reflection is not kept in the mind of the individual but is distributed through the social activity of the school community. (Hoffman-Kipp, Artiles & Lopez Torres, 2003).
            In the fourth place, the community must be defined by a genre; there must be a community-specific genre. A discourse community utilizes and hence possesses one or more genres in the communicative furtherance of its aims. As Kutz (1997) stated, “communicative competence is described as what one must know in order to use language appropriately in particular discourse communities.” (as cited in Kelly-Kleese, 2001, Communicative Competence and Boundaries section, para. 1). According to Cole (1999), “culture itself mediates human actions in the sense that it is a system of shared meanings or social inheritances embodied in the artifacts of a given social structure.” (As cited in Hoffman-Kipp, Artiles & Lopez Torres, 2003, Teacher reflection and learning are culturally mediated section, para. 1).
In the fifth place, information should be exchanged through a highly specialized terminology. Every discourse community has its own specific lexis. According to Kutz (1997) “…discourse communities share understandings about how to communicate knowledge and achieve shared purposes, and they exhibit a flow of discourse that has a particular structure and style.” (as cited in Kelly-Kleese, 2004, The Community College as a Discourse Community section, para. 2).
            Last but not least, the community members should achieve a high general level of expertise. The community members have a suitable degree of discoursal expertise. Every community has experienced members and less experienced members. Survival of the community depends on a reasonable ration between novices and experts.
            In conclusion, a discourse community is a group of communicators with common goals. As McLaughlin & Talbert (1993) asserted, it “cannot exist in the absence of a collaborative culture and an environment that supports risk-taking and reflection.” (As cited in Wenzlaff & Wieseman, 2004, Summary and Implications section, para. 2).



References
Hoffman-Kipp, P., Artiles, A. J., & Lopez Torres, L. (2003). Beyond reflection: teacher learning as praxis. Theory into Practice. Retrieved October 2007, from http://findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_m0NQM/is_3_42/ai_108442653
Kelly-Kleese, C. (2001). Editor’s Choice: An Open Memo to Community College Faculty and Administrators. Community College Review. Retrieved October 2007, from http://findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_m0HCZ/is_1_29/ai_77481463
Kelly-Kleese, C. (2004). UCLA community college review: community college scholarship
and discourse. Community College Review. Retrieved October 2007,     fromhttp://findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_m0HCZ/is_1_32/ai_n6361541
Wenzlaff, T. L., & Wieseman, K. C. (2004). Teachers Need Teachers To Grow. Teacher
Education Quarterly. Retrieved October 2007,  fromhttp://findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_qa3960/is_200404/ai_n9349405



jueves, 5 de septiembre de 2013

Welcome to my EAP blog!

My name is Daniela Dib and I am 31 years old. I am a teacher of English and an Eng<>Spa sworn translator.

The reason for this blog is to share my academic pieces of writing with all of you. Your feedback is welcome!

So eager to get started!