Analysis of Research Articles
By Barochiner, Erika and Dib, Daniela
Research Articles: Analysis of Introduction and
Methods Sections
According to Copley,
Greenberg, Handley, and Oaks (1996), “a research paper is more than the sum of
your sources, more than a collection of different pieces of information about a
topic” (para. 1). An important section in research papers is the introduction,
in which the writer clearly introduces the topic and provides the necessary
context. Methods sections contain the procedures necessary to carry out the
research. As stated by Wiersma (1995), “The
methods or procedures section is really the heart of the research proposal. The
activities should be described with as much detail as possible, and the
continuity between them should be apparent” (p. 409). The purpose of our
writing is to analyze and compare the introduction and methods sections of the
following articles: “Aspirin in Patients Undergoing Noncardiac Surgery”
(Deveraux et al., 2014), and “The Development of Advanced Learner Oral
Proficiency Using Ipads” (Lys, 2013).
Swales
and Feak (1994) provide certain guidelines for writing introductions to
research papers in the educational field. These include going from the general
to the specific and to succeed in making the reader become interested in the
article, which can be achieved by following the Create a Research Space Model
(C.A.R.S.). Such model consists of three basic steps, known as moves. The first
move involves establishing a research territory, showing the importance of the
research area to be studied and mentioning previous research work on the topic.
The second move requires the authors to establish a niche, that is, indicate a
gap in previous research. Finally, the third move consists in occupying that
niche, by stating the purpose of the study which intends to fill that gap.
In this
respect, the introduction to the education research paper by Lys (2013) seems
to have successfully complied with the above mentioned requirements. The author
goes through the first move by indicating that an important issue to discuss is
how college students can attain advanced-level L2 proficiency in only four
years of classroom instruction. After this, a niche is identified when she
argues that “creating an environment that promotes scaffolded work that is
within the ZPD (...) can be a major challenge for language instructions” (Lys,
2013, p.96). Finally, she goes into the third move by stating that to face that
challenge she experimented with the use of iPads in an advanced conversation
class (Lys, 2013). This introduction is about six pages long and is clearly
identified with a heading in capital letters. It includes a literature review
section which, in turn, is divided into four subsections, as well as a section
focusing on the study and another one stating the research questions. The
author has used APA style for in-text citations and has provided a
comprehensive account of the theoretical framework for the study.
On the
other hand, the introduction to the research paper written by Deveraux et al.
(2014) within the field of medicine is quite short and has not been identified
with a heading. Despite its length, however, the authors have clearly gone
through the three moves in writing introductions suggested by Swales and Feak
(1994) and they can be easily identified in the section. The first two
paragraphs of the introduction present the area of inquiry around which the
study was conducted, that is, the current use of aspirin to prevent venous
thromboembolism after noncardiac surgery. In the third paragraph a niche is
identified by stating that there are uncertainties regarding the risks and
benefits of the use of aspirin in these cases and underscoring the need for a
large perioperative trial (Deveraux et al., 2014). Finally, in the fourth and
last paragraph, the authors bridge that gap when they explain that they
conducted a perioperative trial to evaluate the effects of aspirin on patients undergoing
noncardiac surgery. As far as in-text citations are concerned, the authors seem
to have used a style other than APA because citations only include superscript
numbers but not authors or years.
With
regard to the methods section in research papers, the word Methods is
usually centered on the page to identify the beginning of the section, which is
usually divided into at least three subsections, to wit: participants,
materials and procedure (Swales, 1990, Swales and Feak, 1994). The purpose of
the methods section, then, is to describe how the study was conducted,
providing detailed information about the study population, a presentation of
the procedures used to collect data, the materials that were used, such as
questionnaires, interviews, and equipment, a detailed account of the steps that
were taken, and an explanation of data analysis procedures.
In the
medicine research paper (Deveraux et al., 2014), the word Methods is
centered on the page and it is divided into six subsections: study design,
study oversight, patients, procedures, study outcomes, and statistical
analysis. On the other hand, in the education research paper (Lys, 2013),
instead of Methods, the word Methodology is used, which is on the
left margin, not centered. It is a rather short section compared to the
medicine research paper and it is subdivided into three subsections:
participants, data collection, and measuring language performance. Drawing an
analogy between the two research papers, it may be observed that both include
the use of past forms, tentative language, and passive voice. References to
figures and tables appear in both papers to provide supportive details of the
researchers´work.
In
conclusion, the introduction section in the research article by Deveraux et al.
(2014) is quite short and concise but clearly establishes a territory in the
research field, identifies a niche and occupies it. In turn, the research
article by Lys (2013) is much longer and provides a comprehensive review of the
literature, while also clearly going through the three moves. On the other
hand, the methods section in the medicine research paper seems more detailed
and thorough than the education research paper but both succeed in providing a
clear account of how the study was conducted, by making reference to the
participants, the materials and the procedures that were used. Finally, it may
be observed that although the articles belong to different fields, they share
text-type features, established structure patterns, language and grammatical
aspects.
References
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